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PostSubject: The emperor trains.   Wed Jul 21, 2010 5:13 pm

Raz sat in a meditative state in his palace in a room that was 4000x's earths natural gravity his goo body was nearly melting off his body from the sheer force of the gravity, Raz roared his energy burning to max as he threw himself into his training sequence throwing hooks and jabs matching them witch combo kicks as holograms appeared around him attacking him from every direction. Razz struck out like a mad beats his hand's lighting with Ki as he punched and ducked bobbing and weaving from the hundreds of holograms that attacked him, Raz felt the ferocity of the battle the ache of his muscles as he truly trained for the first time in so long so many enemies but no where near enough strength.

Raz fixed that by boosting the hologram speed to 6 million as the blows fell like a pouring rain steam floated out of the majin as he ducked and struck sometimes feeling the soft flow as a Hologram struck true to a body part and yet the majin refused to give up and be surpassed he had worked hard now was his chance to be the best and stay there forever, Raz had forbidden himself from any Ki energy so he kept fighting throwing massive punches combining kicks with speed his burning eyes flicked all around trying to keep the number game going but there were so many of them coming Raz felt the different feelings of being struck a score board at the top of the Training room showed how many times he had been hit so far it was at 64 and rising but his own score was 58 and that was facing a hundred of his own power level at 4000x's earths gravity.

Raz twisted his body as Holograms flew around he had Made them look like his own men Ichiro, Kei, Lance, they flew at Raz testing him pushing him to his limits just like his real friends would have done but have yet to actually meet him in combat and test him at this level, As the blows kept coming more steam floated out of the majin Emperor who refused to lose his blows came faster a blur as he took down 40 at once spinning around he fired off kicks and punches unable to grab them for holograms they were and nothing more. As the battle progressed the Holograms began to slow in the Majins eyes they floated as if frozen in air even though they were moving at full speed Raz struck and struck full offensive his muscled bulging with power as steam surrounded the whole room a error occurred opened the door sucking the steam out and yet the emperor fought on his whole body one massive weapon being honed to do his bidding.

Raz felt the gravity rise by a thousand his whole body nearly being thrown to the ground as the holograms came at full speed again forcing raz on the offensive yet he refused to quit the passion of the fighting was making razz feel young again it brought back memories of his younger days, Raz was standing on a planet staring at a massive demon laughing as he struck and struck innocent civilians but he was Hazard the demon king suddenly a warrior rose from the race his power was unbelievable and finally Raz saw his escape he ran and struck at the warrior but was easily knocked aside Hazard was forced to fight and fight he did against a very powerful enemy.

Hazard was fighting like a mad beast and the alien as well they were evenly matched suddenly Raz was behind the Demon king and slammed a fist through his back giving the other being the chance and together they killed Raz's tormentor raz fled the planet afterward him a very happy majin for once he was completely and utterly free, Raz awoke his muscles had been fighting while his mind drifted but he noticed he was still high in the lead and the gravity was at 5500x's earths gravity. Muscles bulged from the intense training his mind now once again focused on the battle his power was feeling amazing he hadn't worked this hard in so long it was worth every moment of the massive training he was putting his body through. Raz felt the training end and grinned. "Yes this is what i was looking for"

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PostSubject: Re: The emperor trains.   Thu Jul 22, 2010 5:04 am

...You don't have a gravity room.
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PostSubject: Re: The emperor trains.   Thu Jul 22, 2010 9:02 am

Yes i do. We bought one for our base and the base is in my mountain.
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PostSubject: Re: The emperor trains.   Thu Jul 22, 2010 9:23 am

Originality: 1-10 7, The training at intense gravity wasn't too original but I haven't seen training that high before, also the look's of the holograms was great!

Creativity: 1-15, 5, he didn't use ki or techniques but he wanted to increase his actual strength, if you could have done a few trick's with your flexible body would have been good also!

Logically: 1-10,, 5, I really can't see a majin taking soo many people of his own power level at that speed, but the part where his eye's slows it down make's a little more sense.

Fighting/ training: 1-50, 19, the fighting was around a 24, but that comeback made it around a 29, you could have made them them have a comeback! Would have been even better if you slowly rose up with the comeback.

Story: 1-15, 10, The flashback made it a ten! Nobody knew that someone else helped you kill Hazard, so that was unknown and made us take a turn in knowing you!

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PostSubject: Re: The emperor trains.   Thu Jul 22, 2010 9:25 am

cool.
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